Hi! my name is Nadia. Today I went to a field trip, to wadi. when first we exit the bus i felt the dusty air in my lungs and this piles of sand on my feat, as the knowledge hoped in my head.
Then me and my friend, Laila ran together to the spot that we should eat there. Then we got so tired so we nearly died on the was. We were in the last row. Laila and I were scared of scorpions and snakes so we were so careful but exited.
Me and Laila finally reached that place. After this we sat down and ate. Dr. bill is a geographical scientist. He talked about the wadi and that it was a ocean!!!
Before it was a wadi, sharks and whales and fish lived there. At first I could not believe it. Then I did, because how could the erosion happen though? Then people were taking notes happily to learn all of that facts.
Then we were aloud to explore the wadi and I found a special rock that I took it home with me. Then me and Laila went to explore then we found a beetle under a rock. Then Laila my friend found a bee in her bag on the paper so then my other friend Hoda tried to kill it then she didn't kill it then I tried to kill it before killing it, the other bee that came out of no wear stung me then i killed the other one. Then the crowd climbed up but near the top i got screed so i climbed down.


I loved that your blog was very informative and descriptive! I really learnt a lot it was a great SHORT story that describes all what you did in a fun, interesting way! GREAT JOB! :)
ReplyDeleteVery descriptive of your story in the wadi! Everything is almost perfect. (check spelling and you called Mr. Bill a Mrs. )
ReplyDeletenadia! great job you really grabbed my attention at the beginning it is a very well structured story
ReplyDeletenadia i love your bllog and how you put deatail and all the information you got i am speachles (:0
ReplyDelete